Sunday 29 January 2012

Chloe's group Compo

The majestic sun shone against vast mountains of white, fluffy clouds in the azure blue sky. The slight breeze rustled the tree leaves.It was just a perfect day for a picnic at the beach. My brother and I squealed in delight when our parents said that we were having a picnic at the beach.         In a twinkle of an eye, we reached the beach. We unpacked our things and was having a whale of time when a little girl came towards me. She was crying.My family and I were shocked and our heart went out to her.                                                                                                                                                                                                                            The little girl's glassy eyes were deprived of happiness."Where are your parents?" we asked curiously. She did not answer us and continue crying.Out of compassion,we asked her again.She told us that she had lost her parents.Sympathy and sadness welled up in our eyes.When we heard her story.We decided to keep her with us until we found her parents.We searched for her parents but to no avail.We decided to dial her relatives number after we asked for her relatives number.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Done by:Chloe, Yong Shin, Arnold and Qin Xu                                                                                                   

5 comments:

  1. Dear Chloe and group,

    Your compo is fabulous!

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  2. Dear Chloe and Group your compo was marvellous, I think you all will score for compositions Exams.Keep it up!!!

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  3. Excellent compo! Good job to Chloe & group!

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  4. Your compo is good! Keep it up!!

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