Wednesday, 25 January 2012

Stephanie group

Stephanie group’s wrting It was a sunny day, the blazing sun scorched the ground. We planned to have a picnic at the beach. We packed our swimming trunks into the car boot. When we reached there, it was as crowded as a pack of sardines in a tin can. We managed to find a shady spot. As it was so warm, we decided to have a swim in the cool sparkling sea. After a while we went back to the picnic mat. We chatted happily over our hearty lunch. Suddenly, a little girl came towards us, she was crying non-stop. . . We tried to pacify her and asked her what happened. After a while, she stopped crying. . .
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8 comments:

  1. Celest25 January 2012 at 23:46

    Great job!

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    1. Anonymous26 January 2012 at 04:36

      Thanks,Celest!





      Thank You
      Best regards

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  2. Jesslynn Khong26 January 2012 at 03:38

    Dear Stephanie and group members,

    I like your compo because in your compo, there are many adjectives.
    Excellent!

    Jesslynn

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    1. Anonymous26 January 2012 at 04:37

      Thanks,Jesslyn!






      Best regards
      Thank you

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  3. Life with Regina26 January 2012 at 05:20

    Dear Stephanie,your title for this compo is picnic at the beach right? If it is so you only wrote about bringing swimming trunks but you did not mention the food,drinks and the picnic mat.But anyway it is a great compo!
    Yours Truly, Regina

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  4. guat bee26 January 2012 at 23:09

    Excellent, Great Job



    From leyi

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  5. Celest27 January 2012 at 19:49

    Mdm Pavithra, why isn't our group put up yet?

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  6. Alicia31 January 2012 at 04:00

    Awesome compo Stephanie & group!

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